Another intresting turn tr*sh novel... the three things which are seriously wrong with this novel
1) ego... egoist... egotist... anything related to these words is frankly like an ant compared to the MC's hoola laala...
Initially it was very good as he was supposed to be the million year old oldman so it got justified but author takes it to whole another level... which can't be put into the words. He's like god in between mortals or should I say, a human armed with insecticide bazookas in the world of insects.
Random character 1: I'm such an such million year old super powerful insect n I'll drink ur blood.
MC: haah, when ur grandpa was alive he was once allowed to bite my ass n drink some blood. Do you think u can do the same, even though I'm piss poor n weak as hell but somehow my plot armour will give me so many out of this world weapons that u'll die bleeding from ur luck?
No matter where MC goes n who he meets, everyone is an insect. Which kinda makes it a s*upid story as killing insects isn't fun at all, that too again n again.
2) characters :
chracter of MC: which started out something like badass n later turned into a obnoxiously perveted scatterbrain. He has a fetish of collecting maids n stunning them again n again by killing new insects.
Eg-
Initial MC: I'll give u only one chance to follow me as a maid....
Later MC: plz follow me, I beg u.... I'll give u infinite chances to say yes.
He was someone who lived for millions of years but somehow when he gains his body n returns back to 13 year old. His personality also changes back to 13 year whiny kid.
Author initially starts introducing some good characters who have the potential to become something rememberable but alas how can Mc's existence tolerate it. All chracter even though some of them have lived for millions of years, behave as horny teenagers going through rebellious phase.
Women in this novel have heart shaped eyes.... they are there for showing surprise, asking MC some random questions then behave like maniacs...
Woman 1: omg! How could he knew something like that? It's not even written in history........... (always ending at) but he only 13!!!!!!
Woman2: how? Just how? He's only 13. How does he know something like that.
Woman 100: omg!is this for real? He's just 15 or 16 n he knows this too....
They don't have emotions apart from wholeheartedly devoting to the MC n following him word by word. They're like marionettes.
One woman had a potential but she too became like this after MC randomly taught her something (gain immortality) in his crow form. Author has some serious problem with cross dressing. MC constantly issues threats to women cross dressers that he'll rip their clothes n spank their asses. (this is what u do when u lived for millions of years)
Villians: they're as usual pea brain hulks who are there for issuing random death threats. They've a compassionate heart for not attacking MC or his followers while he's weak or away. They will wait till he comes back or becomes stronger.
They know that MC's gonna kill them thus they should use full power from start but hell no!! They've excuses for every situation.
Villian 1: super ultra bad dude is in close door meditation
Villian 2: let grand pa break into such n such cultivation as only grandpa can kill MC.
Villian 100: so he's not around that means he would've left some super ultra one shot killer treasure to kill us... thus we would wait..
Apart from background raping, killing, kidnapping... u can't hold anything against such sweet villians.
3) the real villian in this novel is audience or crowd: the level of street chatterbox is exceeding wumao level. From the first fight, street chatterboxes include from a insect to some super ultra powerful grandpa doing running commentary.
In this novel there's something called coffin grandpa (since none canbe immortal so major powerhouses seal themselves into the coffin to save their clans from some shitty situations, them coming out will be like u just fired a nuke for a gun shot) but for running commentary they'll not mind anything as commentary is more important than their life.
P.s. author tries to kill the reader with infobits. He tries to introduce a objects with ancient history to get ur attention n when he becomes successful he tries to slap readers with, "knowing more can kill u".
Eg- girl 1: seeing MC reminiscing about something while looking at an ancient object, will ask a question.
MC: tries to answer with the hint of getting ur attention like including a past student's name, his own history... blah blah.. with 3-4 paragraphs into it, he suddenly slap the reader n the girl with- knowing more can harm n that's it... then that thing will become mystry for u just as much as it's for the author. Never to be introduced again.
U can live with it if it happens for one or 2 times but author keeps doing it til he make reader annoyed.
Apart from some s*upid dialogues I'm still not clear what he trying to do (to some smart asses I know about that damn grotto he wants to destroy). But it's getting boring with same repetitive plot of MC travelling, then get a maid side kick who'll be so dumb to say he's just 16 n he knows this, then face slapping bad guys n moving on to do the same.
Overall I can say
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